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flowsoffireTitle: Burn Now (Or Die A Traitor's Death)
Author: flowsoffire
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing/characters: Eleventh Doctor, TARDIS
Genre: Tragedy/Angst
Rating: T
Word count: c. 1600 words.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
Summary: Before his death, the Doctor makes the hardest sacrifice. AU!verse, the Doctor destroys the TARDIS.
Author's note: This was written for a prompt given on the meme "Three fics you think I will never, ever, ever write". The one and only![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
a_phoenixdragon gave me "The Doctor deliberately, maliciously destroys the TARDIS". That was nice XD But that was the point of the meme, and a good challenge, so I tried my best to make it work. Hence the following. Slight AU, I tried to imply every relevant change clearly enough but I’ll gladly explain in the comments if anything remains confusing. Sorry for the heartbreak. *winces* Hum… enjoy!
Also written for the prompt Light and Dark on![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
who_contest.
FF.net — AO3 — Teaspoon
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She glows.
The light gleams and flickers, an iridescent beam. Under his eyes and hands, everywhere it pulsates—a living thing. His TARDIS, time-soaked and timeless, miraculous.
Like orange heat, the glow kisses the pliers between his tense fingers.
He breathes. He tries, at least; his chest is tight, his ribcage clenched around his hearts. A vicious, destructive urge is tingling through his veins as he squeezes the implement, hard enough to hurt. Wicked, unhinged laughter is echoing in his head, a cynical cackle.
Perhaps this is madness.
It is absurd. It is horrid. It is unescapable. Perhaps this is what it tastes like—steel upon his tongue, acid in his lungs, fire in his gut. Hatred, rising and rushing in a capricious wave, turned inwards.
No… he cannot claim that. He cannot assume the cloak of innocence.
His beautiful machine…
His eyes are dry, stinging. The console is all rippling patterns of light and dark; the beauty of it almost sickens him. His hearts are in his throat and he must discard them and leave them on that floor, he knows—then tear them apart, and run, one last time. His head must be the sole master for this. The head giving commands, and automatic gestures to follow them, falling together one after the next. Only this way can he survive this.
The hovering, surreal feel of the whole situation might be the thing that saves him, in a manner, or sees him through this. Saving is a relative notion after all, when he will not be surviving it for long. There is some comfort in the notion, he finds. A circle—as his death makes the sacrifice necessary, the sacrifice shall make the death welcome.
He does laugh out loud then. The sound echoes, deranged and startling. His shudder is almost convulsive.
He takes the shields down.
Perhaps the TARDIS knows. He trembles as he turns functions off, one by one, leaving only the manual controls. On the screen, he can see his target: a young star, bubbling with furious flares, chaotic, glorious and hungry. He grits his teeth as he steers the machine, positioning it carefully… right over the burning ball.
Vortex manipulator clasped tight around his wrist, he is ready. He grips the edge of the console.
No choice… he has no choice.
If he could close his eyes these days, be it for one minute, if he were not that viscerally afraid—maybe he would see his TARDIS sitting quiet and inconspicuous at the corner of some street, gathering dust. He planned this before; two faces back, he sent his ship away, one cherished human life shielded inside of her. In the face of his doom, he saved the two most precious things he had to hold onto—none of them his to claim. Yet that was counting without Rose’s fierce willpower. He can see her in his mind’s eye, even now, blazing bright with the ship’s ageless energy…
No one is here today to save him, or her. He left the Ponds home, to their life, their future… Amy won’t be back for him this time. She came once, as he was trapped in this very room; she popped here with that very same manipulator he now wears with shame, all fierce eyes and flaming hair, grasped him and left. Even then, the TARDIS was a burning sun, and still in the end he saved her… But he won’t be there to do that every time. The universe will have to do without him. His fate is set and sealed, unescapable.
He wants to dream of his TARDIS on the corner of a street, forgotten and safe—yet if he surrendered to exhaustion, if he let the darkness take over him, he would not be granted such peaceful delusion. No, he would have truth, a truth twisted enough no lie could scald fiercer, or stab deeper. He would see his options—destruction, or surrender.
They took his ship before. They commanded her while he struggled helplessly, and drove her as they wished. Once he is gone, they can seize her again. The last TARDIS in the universe, and he saw the abominations that could be done from and to her, once stolen from her thief. The knowledge burns in his mind, under his closed lids—the paradox machine, seared into his memory, corrupted and screaming…
The choice lies in his hands. He knows the risk, and knows it is not one he is willing to take. The responsibility is his also, as with the decision comes the consequence, the deed. If he cannot protect his precious TARDIS—
—then he has to end her.
Alone remain the anti-gravs. He hovers, they hover, separated and together. She will fight him on this.
Lightning-fast, he pushes the lever.
The console lurches. Their fall is not a fall as the ship surges to willful life, flips some controls back with a furious wheeze. The pliers gleam murderous with the TARDIS’ light when he cuts a cord, then another. The anti-gravs snap back into place. He rams at the command, and madness seizes him for a moment. She won’t accept, she won’t allow this, so he must forestall her resistance, he must strike and maim—
He flies away from the console, tossed off like a tiny thing, landing hard into one of the staircases. Breathlessness overwhelms him—abandon or destroy, abandon or destroy—and he struggles his way upright, lurches back to the centre. The anti-gravs are ruined, or close enough. It could be a fast enough repair, seeing how blindly he stabbed, with just a bit of time—time the ship doesn’t have. She can’t dematerialize, yet can keep some modicum of direction, and reels in her struggle against the star’s attraction. He might be crying; he wipes or swipes or claws at his face, pushes towards the console. He strikes again in a blur. New stars seem to burst blearily under his hands; fire runs and roars, a severed cord hangs limply, and wish as he might that he didn’t, he knows the weakest points. Sensitive or delicate, rather than weak, gently brushed or long tweaked at; he tears at them. The TARDIS shrieks in betrayal.
There is one shift he fails to clearly perceive, but at some point she falls and falls, the conflagration rages everywhere as it did on some distant day of his rebirth into this body, and he wants to blaze and burn with her, extinguished. But there is one set moment he cannot escape, one appointed time and place and this is not it. Fixed points; he will have to bend and not die screaming in the inferno of his ship. He waits until he knows for sure she cannot escape any longer, wishing desperately that he could not, either. The manipulator at his wrist is ready for that second, preset with heavy hearts. The vortex sucks him in.
Then there is Earth and he falls like a man gutted out. The smells and sunlight assault him; he gags and shakes, his entire mind seeming to frantically reach out for something gone. There is a terrifying numbness where a connection used to glow, a gaping wound in his sense of time, a void in eleven dimensions. He sobs and forgets his name and past and sense of self, for all only existed cradled in her; for she saw him born as truly the Doctor, she saw him change, the first time, then time and time again. He is no Doctor now, but a wretched gasping thing—the Bringer of Darkness, truly, the Executioner.
He curls under the cruelly warm caress of the sun, the distant noise of voices that seem half a universe away, human lives unfolding. A bird chants, and gravel digs into his palms; normality, the cycle of linear time are pushing against his skin, prodding his every sense. He is overwhelmed and hollowed out, scarcely lucid yet too aware. Time drifts around him, spans into possibilities that seem so dim now, so small. Without her he hardly feels, hardly thinks, and his head touches the ground. He finds no will to pick himself up. He might as well die there. He would sooner have burned.
Time passes in quantified fragments like water through his fingers, or not—he cannot even feel a cold and cleansing touch, cannot hold on to anything pure, anything real. Everything is a blur, a buzz in his ears and he would not find the will to reach anyway. A whole universe, off. He will end not as a song, but a succession of panting breaths and then silence.
The Doctor shudders on the ground. The light on him declines into darkness; sometime soon or far away, stars will twinkle into life. Stars—another love now robbed from him, branded with pain, deservedly.
His hearts throb like a wound, his lungs swell and deflate, and the Doctor shifts. Weary and thoughtless, he drags a limb after the other until he rises from the sidewalk, a tall hunched form. Two hundred years he spent running. No more.
Now, he can scarcely trudge along, rootless. Now he has no escape, no delusions, no precious stolen instants. Nowhere to lure people to. No home, no haven, nowhere to keep him grounded.
But grounded he is, to a future carved in stone. 22 April 2011, 5:02 PM on a quiet shore. Last trip. Heʼll give Amy the manipulator back.
A reminder. He is not even sure he can face her. He will, for she and Rory are whatʼs left of the best of him.
Then he can stop. Then he can rest.
Then, he shall burn.
Utah. Blue envelopes in his pocket. Minute things to hold onto, one and the next and the next again, until itʼs time.
When he looks up, the sun is bleeding over the horizon in accusing hues. He winces, and prays for the dark to come soon.
Shadows swallow him, and for a moment, he is no more.
Author: flowsoffire
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing/characters: Eleventh Doctor, TARDIS
Genre: Tragedy/Angst
Rating: T
Word count: c. 1600 words.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
Summary: Before his death, the Doctor makes the hardest sacrifice. AU!verse, the Doctor destroys the TARDIS.
Author's note: This was written for a prompt given on the meme "Three fics you think I will never, ever, ever write". The one and only
a_phoenixdragon gave me "The Doctor deliberately, maliciously destroys the TARDIS". That was nice XD But that was the point of the meme, and a good challenge, so I tried my best to make it work. Hence the following. Slight AU, I tried to imply every relevant change clearly enough but I’ll gladly explain in the comments if anything remains confusing. Sorry for the heartbreak. *winces* Hum… enjoy!Also written for the prompt Light and Dark on
who_contest.FF.net — AO3 — Teaspoon
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She glows.
The light gleams and flickers, an iridescent beam. Under his eyes and hands, everywhere it pulsates—a living thing. His TARDIS, time-soaked and timeless, miraculous.
Like orange heat, the glow kisses the pliers between his tense fingers.
He breathes. He tries, at least; his chest is tight, his ribcage clenched around his hearts. A vicious, destructive urge is tingling through his veins as he squeezes the implement, hard enough to hurt. Wicked, unhinged laughter is echoing in his head, a cynical cackle.
Perhaps this is madness.
It is absurd. It is horrid. It is unescapable. Perhaps this is what it tastes like—steel upon his tongue, acid in his lungs, fire in his gut. Hatred, rising and rushing in a capricious wave, turned inwards.
No… he cannot claim that. He cannot assume the cloak of innocence.
His beautiful machine…
His eyes are dry, stinging. The console is all rippling patterns of light and dark; the beauty of it almost sickens him. His hearts are in his throat and he must discard them and leave them on that floor, he knows—then tear them apart, and run, one last time. His head must be the sole master for this. The head giving commands, and automatic gestures to follow them, falling together one after the next. Only this way can he survive this.
The hovering, surreal feel of the whole situation might be the thing that saves him, in a manner, or sees him through this. Saving is a relative notion after all, when he will not be surviving it for long. There is some comfort in the notion, he finds. A circle—as his death makes the sacrifice necessary, the sacrifice shall make the death welcome.
He does laugh out loud then. The sound echoes, deranged and startling. His shudder is almost convulsive.
He takes the shields down.
Perhaps the TARDIS knows. He trembles as he turns functions off, one by one, leaving only the manual controls. On the screen, he can see his target: a young star, bubbling with furious flares, chaotic, glorious and hungry. He grits his teeth as he steers the machine, positioning it carefully… right over the burning ball.
Vortex manipulator clasped tight around his wrist, he is ready. He grips the edge of the console.
No choice… he has no choice.
If he could close his eyes these days, be it for one minute, if he were not that viscerally afraid—maybe he would see his TARDIS sitting quiet and inconspicuous at the corner of some street, gathering dust. He planned this before; two faces back, he sent his ship away, one cherished human life shielded inside of her. In the face of his doom, he saved the two most precious things he had to hold onto—none of them his to claim. Yet that was counting without Rose’s fierce willpower. He can see her in his mind’s eye, even now, blazing bright with the ship’s ageless energy…
No one is here today to save him, or her. He left the Ponds home, to their life, their future… Amy won’t be back for him this time. She came once, as he was trapped in this very room; she popped here with that very same manipulator he now wears with shame, all fierce eyes and flaming hair, grasped him and left. Even then, the TARDIS was a burning sun, and still in the end he saved her… But he won’t be there to do that every time. The universe will have to do without him. His fate is set and sealed, unescapable.
He wants to dream of his TARDIS on the corner of a street, forgotten and safe—yet if he surrendered to exhaustion, if he let the darkness take over him, he would not be granted such peaceful delusion. No, he would have truth, a truth twisted enough no lie could scald fiercer, or stab deeper. He would see his options—destruction, or surrender.
They took his ship before. They commanded her while he struggled helplessly, and drove her as they wished. Once he is gone, they can seize her again. The last TARDIS in the universe, and he saw the abominations that could be done from and to her, once stolen from her thief. The knowledge burns in his mind, under his closed lids—the paradox machine, seared into his memory, corrupted and screaming…
The choice lies in his hands. He knows the risk, and knows it is not one he is willing to take. The responsibility is his also, as with the decision comes the consequence, the deed. If he cannot protect his precious TARDIS—
—then he has to end her.
Alone remain the anti-gravs. He hovers, they hover, separated and together. She will fight him on this.
Lightning-fast, he pushes the lever.
The console lurches. Their fall is not a fall as the ship surges to willful life, flips some controls back with a furious wheeze. The pliers gleam murderous with the TARDIS’ light when he cuts a cord, then another. The anti-gravs snap back into place. He rams at the command, and madness seizes him for a moment. She won’t accept, she won’t allow this, so he must forestall her resistance, he must strike and maim—
He flies away from the console, tossed off like a tiny thing, landing hard into one of the staircases. Breathlessness overwhelms him—abandon or destroy, abandon or destroy—and he struggles his way upright, lurches back to the centre. The anti-gravs are ruined, or close enough. It could be a fast enough repair, seeing how blindly he stabbed, with just a bit of time—time the ship doesn’t have. She can’t dematerialize, yet can keep some modicum of direction, and reels in her struggle against the star’s attraction. He might be crying; he wipes or swipes or claws at his face, pushes towards the console. He strikes again in a blur. New stars seem to burst blearily under his hands; fire runs and roars, a severed cord hangs limply, and wish as he might that he didn’t, he knows the weakest points. Sensitive or delicate, rather than weak, gently brushed or long tweaked at; he tears at them. The TARDIS shrieks in betrayal.
There is one shift he fails to clearly perceive, but at some point she falls and falls, the conflagration rages everywhere as it did on some distant day of his rebirth into this body, and he wants to blaze and burn with her, extinguished. But there is one set moment he cannot escape, one appointed time and place and this is not it. Fixed points; he will have to bend and not die screaming in the inferno of his ship. He waits until he knows for sure she cannot escape any longer, wishing desperately that he could not, either. The manipulator at his wrist is ready for that second, preset with heavy hearts. The vortex sucks him in.
Then there is Earth and he falls like a man gutted out. The smells and sunlight assault him; he gags and shakes, his entire mind seeming to frantically reach out for something gone. There is a terrifying numbness where a connection used to glow, a gaping wound in his sense of time, a void in eleven dimensions. He sobs and forgets his name and past and sense of self, for all only existed cradled in her; for she saw him born as truly the Doctor, she saw him change, the first time, then time and time again. He is no Doctor now, but a wretched gasping thing—the Bringer of Darkness, truly, the Executioner.
He curls under the cruelly warm caress of the sun, the distant noise of voices that seem half a universe away, human lives unfolding. A bird chants, and gravel digs into his palms; normality, the cycle of linear time are pushing against his skin, prodding his every sense. He is overwhelmed and hollowed out, scarcely lucid yet too aware. Time drifts around him, spans into possibilities that seem so dim now, so small. Without her he hardly feels, hardly thinks, and his head touches the ground. He finds no will to pick himself up. He might as well die there. He would sooner have burned.
Time passes in quantified fragments like water through his fingers, or not—he cannot even feel a cold and cleansing touch, cannot hold on to anything pure, anything real. Everything is a blur, a buzz in his ears and he would not find the will to reach anyway. A whole universe, off. He will end not as a song, but a succession of panting breaths and then silence.
The Doctor shudders on the ground. The light on him declines into darkness; sometime soon or far away, stars will twinkle into life. Stars—another love now robbed from him, branded with pain, deservedly.
His hearts throb like a wound, his lungs swell and deflate, and the Doctor shifts. Weary and thoughtless, he drags a limb after the other until he rises from the sidewalk, a tall hunched form. Two hundred years he spent running. No more.
Now, he can scarcely trudge along, rootless. Now he has no escape, no delusions, no precious stolen instants. Nowhere to lure people to. No home, no haven, nowhere to keep him grounded.
But grounded he is, to a future carved in stone. 22 April 2011, 5:02 PM on a quiet shore. Last trip. Heʼll give Amy the manipulator back.
A reminder. He is not even sure he can face her. He will, for she and Rory are whatʼs left of the best of him.
Then he can stop. Then he can rest.
Then, he shall burn.
Utah. Blue envelopes in his pocket. Minute things to hold onto, one and the next and the next again, until itʼs time.
When he looks up, the sun is bleeding over the horizon in accusing hues. He winces, and prays for the dark to come soon.
Shadows swallow him, and for a moment, he is no more.
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Date: 2014-09-25 07:26 pm (UTC)Oh, you're good, Azzie...I think you win this round. I think you're going to walk away with First place on this one...
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Date: 2014-09-25 07:50 pm (UTC)And here I thought I'd be the one who wouldn't live this down XD
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Date: 2014-09-25 07:57 pm (UTC)(Something I didn't mention in my AO3 comment...)
UGH IT'S SO PERFECT TOO BECAUSE YOU DEMONSTRATE PERFECTLY HOW FLAWED THE DOCTOR IS IN HIS REASONING, HIS ARROGANCE IN BELIEVING THAT HE KNOWS WHAT'S BEST FOR EVERYONE EVEN THOUGH HE DOES THINGS WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT AND IT'S TERRIFYING AND YOU. CAPTURED. IT. PERFECTLY.
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Date: 2014-09-25 08:30 pm (UTC)I love it when that happens.
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Date: 2014-09-25 10:01 pm (UTC)I love you.
I love you and I thank you and my gods...
*Sits back and breathes*
OMFG.
You are the best. You are...you are a goddess with a virtual pen. Bless you, my Darling.
*HUGS YOU FIERCELY*
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Date: 2014-09-26 05:20 am (UTC)And you! The evil genius who gave this to her!
OMG, you two! There's a reason you're FicWives; perfectly matched!
♥♥♥
God, I love the pair of you!
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Date: 2014-09-26 06:19 am (UTC)♥♥♥ Yes. I love you so much for that parallel.
how he greets Amy and Rory and River at the picnic in Utah before younger River kills him (for real in your AU).
Ah, that was my problem—I was wondering if I should clarify the AU. The premise I had in mind for it was "a world where River doesn't exist" because it doesn't only influence him in terms of their relationship: River not existing brought on the fact that it was the Doctor trapped in a burning TARDIS and unable to control her in any way, and it also makes his death feel all the more looming in a way, if that makes sense… He can hold on to calling his friends to that time, ending with them, but besides he's just surrendering to a foreign and hostile enemy instead of accepting death from the hands of a person he loves and who is also a victim. (Not looking for Melody = not learning as many things about the Silence, not seeing them in person, mostly. I haven't fully developed in my head the exact way his death would take place then, nor the way he learned about the Lake Silencio date, but it is a set point, it can come from another source.) Plus he knows that there is nobody else who can pilot his TARDIS after he's gone—even if River couldn't have guarded her much better than he could, it still means his dying means leaving her behind completely. So all of those gave good psychological reasons to enormously increase the existing trauma/fear, hence that terrible decision. I tried my best to imply River's absence with his being trapped in the TARDIS, the fact it was Amy rescuing him, the never mentioning her but mentioning Amy and Rory, and the song and water as a symbolism of what eludes him in the end—but it was hell getting a traumatized POV character to imply the absence of something that had never existed for him ;) So maybe I should just state it outright in the AN—I did wonder about that. What do you think?
ALSO THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT FEEDBACK. I just went off on my tangent and almost forgot, lol, but your praise means a lot to me—and you know I love your writing and the way you handle the Doctor's connection to the TARDIS especially, so that was all the more precious :)
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Date: 2014-09-26 01:49 pm (UTC)I do so love the Doctor's connection to the TARDIS; the way you describe the absence and unreality of everything to the Doctor's senses that results from her death is truly horrifying and heart-breaking.
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Date: 2014-09-26 02:45 pm (UTC)Once more, means a lot to me that you liked it ^_^ I sort of had your fic in mind while writing it, not really as an example/inspiration but as a standard of sorts, a reminder of the complexity of it and how huge it is when People Do It Right ;)
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Date: 2014-09-26 07:31 pm (UTC)Anyway, I'll do the reworking and then answer your message to comment on the suggestions/let you know about my progress, then we can figure it out from there :)
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Date: 2014-09-27 08:49 pm (UTC)Very well written, you can really feel the emotion. It's so JARRING, because you just... can't imagine the Doctor doing this. A very nice piece for you going out of your depth.
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Date: 2014-09-27 09:07 pm (UTC)