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flowsoffireA friend of mine just started uploading the original novel she's working on on Wattpad, so this is pimping time! :D
The novel is a dark surnatural story, set in a dystopian universe. It deals with several difficult themes such as mental illness, gender identity and religion, so here's your warning. Only the first chapter is posted for now, and from that (and knowing/trusting my friend's writing skills), I really encourage everyone to give it a try! This is set to be a really troubling, intriguing story, with deep insight and a blunt, acidic style. So yeah, I've got high hopes for it and I want to help my friend get as wide a readership as possible—so check it out and don't hesitate to jump on board! :) (You can comment through Wattpad or by using a Facebook or Twitter account.)
Link: The Margins
Summary: Held hostage by angels in a mental institution-stylized purgatory where the very laws of physics restrict free will, five patients decide that they've had enough and concoct a plan to get out by dying - again.
Author's website: Eliza Sterling (penname)
The novel is a dark surnatural story, set in a dystopian universe. It deals with several difficult themes such as mental illness, gender identity and religion, so here's your warning. Only the first chapter is posted for now, and from that (and knowing/trusting my friend's writing skills), I really encourage everyone to give it a try! This is set to be a really troubling, intriguing story, with deep insight and a blunt, acidic style. So yeah, I've got high hopes for it and I want to help my friend get as wide a readership as possible—so check it out and don't hesitate to jump on board! :) (You can comment through Wattpad or by using a Facebook or Twitter account.)
Link: The Margins
Summary: Held hostage by angels in a mental institution-stylized purgatory where the very laws of physics restrict free will, five patients decide that they've had enough and concoct a plan to get out by dying - again.
Author's website: Eliza Sterling (penname)
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Date: 2014-06-03 08:44 pm (UTC)I also thought the ending POV change was probably a transition, and that the jarring effect might be intended… That was my interpretation of it anyway.
Edit: my friend answered the points you'd made in a message to me, sorry I'm only getting to you about that now, hahaha. The last paragraph part was indeed a transition, into the next chapter's POV (there are two POV characters). The character was also bashing on the door, not bashing someone.
If you want to keep following the story, you can subscribe to get email updates to the author's Wordpress btw :) She's posted a new chapter now, I might keep on pimping for the first few chapters but idk. I'll see if I think about it, lol.