Uhm, I mean -- this is terrific! Rory is a thinker, and he's not happyhappy all the time, and yet it's never really brought up; this is such a good missing scene I can't even. Okay, missing scene isn't really the right word -- I love how you got all the Rory canon from all the lives in here and explored the Melody/Mels/River thing and the sudden divorce!
Those last two paragraphs are my favourites -- the Doctor's Ponds v. the gravestone's Williamses and so very Rory. <3
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Date: 2013-03-29 09:47 pm (UTC)Uhm, I mean -- this is terrific! Rory is a thinker, and he's not happyhappy all the time, and yet it's never really brought up; this is such a good missing scene I can't even. Okay, missing scene isn't really the right word -- I love how you got all the Rory canon from all the lives in here and explored the Melody/Mels/River thing and the sudden divorce!
Those last two paragraphs are my favourites -- the Doctor's Ponds v. the gravestone's Williamses and so very Rory. <3
(I'm sorry if I'm making No Sense whatsoever.)